Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, November 22, 2013

First Draft Completed!


I'm really excited (and actually proud of myself) - last night I finished the first draft of my first novel. It clocks in at ~ 65,000 words. A little short, but that's where the editing process comes in.  I've read in several advice blogs that you should let your first draft rest for a while, even up to months, to let it breathe and then come back and re-access it with fresh eyes. I can't imagine doing that. I'm ready to edit it. I know that I will have several pass-throughs. I already know some of what I want to change, tweak and edit so that urges me to start editing now.

I was so motivated I wrote 1000+ words a day for the last 22 days! There were days where I tried to convince myself I didn't need to write, but as the end drew near, I realized that I could finish it and I did.

So, I will start editing. I like organizing things - I'm a heavy outliner - so I added a little widget over on the sidebar to track my editing progress, by word count. One scene at a time I'm planning on going through. Try to do everything in piecemeal chunks so you're not overwhelmed. That's how I've taken on everything so far, and it's working.

I'm excited to finally have this story on paper. I have it saved on my computer and on an external hard drive. If there is one piece of advise you should always listen to, it's to keep your writing safe. Imagine being almost done and your hard drive crashes - everything lost. That would be devastating. If you don't have an external hard drive, you can save your writing through the internet, like Google Docs, to help in case your computer tries to become the antagonist of your story.

So, don't give up! Just keep writing! It's an amazing feeling to say you've finished your first draft, no matter how rough it is.

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Night Music - A Short Horror Story

            The soft, strained music invaded her dreams  at first.  Its melody weaved in and out of her consciousness, and prodded the edge of her mind.  Haley’s eyes fluttered open and she found herself in the dark.  She had napped for longer than she had hoped to; the sun had set, draining the late evening light from her house.  She sat up in her bed, rubbing the sleep from her eyes. 

            That’s when she heard the music again.  She sat up straighter, stilling her movements to hear the sound that floated in through her open window.  The slow, old-fashioned music gently blew in with the night air.  Its tune slightly off as if played on an old record player nearing its demise.  It would have been beautiful if it weren't for the sharp notes and shaky singing.  She stepped up to her window, listening.  The rain fell steadily outside, making it hard to place the source of the music.  The Realtor had told her there was a house a mile out along the deserted road. Perhaps the rain was amplifying the music, sending it further than it usually would travel. They must be interesting neighbors if the was their evening music choice.

            She turned from the window, dismissing the music, then picked up her sweater from the unpacked box next to her bed.  She flicked on the light switch in the hall and headed down the stairs.  Haley was glad to be in her new home, unpacked boxes and all.  The house was cheap since the former owners had wanted to sell it quickly. They were moving out of state to live with family, or retire or something.  She couldn't remember the exact reason.  Her husband, Tim, had to work late, but she couldn't wait to start her first night in their beautiful new home and she didn't trust herself to drive on the dark deserted road to the house at night. So, here she was.

            As she looked at the boxes around her in the living room she sighed.  It would be a pain to unpack them, but she couldn't wait to make the house her own. Her Sheppard mix, Jack, stood next to her, whimpering quietly.  She patted him on the head.  “It’s OK buddy.  You’ll love this house soon enough.”

            Jack walked to the door, tail between his legs and began scratching at it, his signal that he wanted out.  She walked over to open the door before he ruined the paint.  “We’ll need to untrain him of that.” She muttered as Jack ran out into the dark of the backyard.  She inhaled the soft sent of the rain.

“Hurry up, Jack!” She called, shivering as the cold swept in through the door.  She stopped when she heard the soft music again, then turned to the box next to her and dug around in hopes of finding a flashlight.  When she finally found one, she flicked it on and headed into the backyard towards the tree line 10 yards from her back porch.  Jack ran back and forth at wood’s edge, barking towards the trees.

            The music became louder as she approached the woods.  She tilted her head to hear, but Jack’s barking and the constant rain made it difficult to pinpoint its exact location.  She pointed her flashlight into the trees.  The beam illuminated the dark trunks and underbrush, before disappearing into the deep darkness of the woods.  She stepped in, straining her ears and shushing Jack at the same time.  She wanted to hear the music.  Where was it coming from? She took a few more steps, now standing between two trees, the darkness pressing in on her and her flashlight illuminating only a few feet in front of her.  She heard a rustle behind her then a low growl from Jack. 

            She swiveled around and saw a raccoon dart out from the bushes. Haley shrieked. It ran past her into the depths of the woods. Jack barked, refusing to enter the tree line to follow the raccoon.  She shook her head, laughing to herself. She was being foolish.  Going into the woods at night would be a sure way to get lost.  She pictured her husband searching the property for her while she wandered the woods.  She pulled her sweater tighter to her and made her way back to the house, her shoes squishing in the wet grass.  “Jack! Come!” She yelled as he continued to growl at the woods.  He whimpered once more before running to her side

            She stepped back onto the porch hearing the music fading behind her.  As she reached out toward the door she saw that it was open a few inches.  She pulled her hand back.  Had she really left it open? That was unlike her.  But, she chalked it up to her yearning to investigate the music and call in Jack. 

            She went inside, latching and closing the door behind her and peeling off her wet sweater.  Jack sat by the door, crying again.  “What is it?” She asked him.  She knew the new house would take some getting used to for Jack.  His usual cheerful disposition was gone, replaced by a nervousness she hadn't seen in him before.  “Daddy will be home soon.” She reassured Jack and herself.

            She stepped to the nearest box, figuring that she might as well start unpacking.  She pulled out a few decorative items turning them in her hands as she contemplated where in the living room to put them.  At least they had the sense to bring the boxes to the room they belonged in. That would alleviate some of the stress of unpacking.  She rolled her shoulders, eager for her husband to get home to massage the knot from her back.  She blamed all the heavy boxes for her soreness. 

Jack suddenly ran away from the back door and skidded to a halt in front of the basement door.  “What’s the matter with you?”  She set down the decoration, calling Jack to her. She froze.  She heard the music again, this time its muffled tones were louder and coming through the basement door. 

            She took a deep breath, trying to calm her shaking hands.  She walked slowly towards the basement door.  Part of her wanted to run the other direction, but where was there to go?  She probably would crash her car driving down that dark driveway.  Where was Tim when she needed him?  She smiled, shaking her head.  That was it! Tim had probably set this up.  He was a prankster and took any chance possible to scare the living daylights out of her.  He loved it even more, knowing she was jumpy.  She could already picture his face, laughing until his sides hurt at her look of horror.  “Oh Haley, you’re so gullible.” She could hear him say through his boyish grin. 

            She firmly grabbed the door handle, taking a breath, then quickly swung the door open, ready to face him and show that she had it all figured out.  She grimaced as the music became almost deafening, the tune even more mutated and distorted than before.  She covered her ears stepping down the first step. 

“Very funny, Tim!” She yelled out, trying to make herself heard over the music.  “Super creepy, but I’ve figured it out!”

She wished that there was a light switch at the top of the stairs.  She made a mental note to do that soon.  The light from the living room only illuminated the stairs before fading out.  She went down a couple more steps.  Even though she knew it was Tim playing a prank on her, she shivered as the eerie music pushed against her ear drums.  She took the last few steps and stood on the solid basement floor.  Haley reached for the light switch, a smug look on her face, to show that she was not fooled. She turned the light on. Everything went quiet.  She shook her head to rid it of the ringing that filled the music’s absence. 

“Tim, you got me, now come here!” She called out.  She tried to still her trembling legs.  She couldn’t see anyone down here.  The dim basement lighting cast the room in an eerie, yellow glow.  She couldn’t figure out where he’d be hiding. 

“Tim? Seriously?”  She couldn’t keep the fear from her voice.  “Why do you have to scare me like this?”  She felt like crying.  She wanted to enjoy her first night in the house but Tim had taken his joke too far and she was starting to get mad.  She tapped her foot impatiently, taking a few steps forward to search the basement for Tim’s clever ruse.

            She heard the basement door creak behind her.  She swiveled around, expecting to find Tim.  Instead she saw a large shadow.  It quietly stood in the doorway. She tried to process what she was seeing. It looked human in shape, but had no solid edges - its was nebulous. She took a step back, her mouth agape. The shadow lurched, flying down the stairs at an inhuman speed.  She screamed, her hands reached out protectively, and then everything went black. 

            “Haley!” The voice was faint at first.  “Haley! Are you alright?”  She opened her eyes, and saw her husband’s worried face.  “What are you doing?” He asked anxiously, his hands moving along the back of her head to check for any bumps or cuts. 

            “Tim!”  She sat up quickly.  Her head spun.  “Tim, there was something down here. There was scary music playing!”  She choked back her sobs. “We have to leave, please.  I know why the former owners left.  There’s something here.  It pushed me. Jack knew it was here” She grabbed his arm firmly, her hands shaking violently.

            Tim’s look of worry turned to confusion.  “What are you talking about, sweetie?”  He held her close to him to comfort her.  “I think you might have a concussion.”

            “No!” She shouted, pushing him away.  She tried to keep calm but she could hear the hysteria in her own voice.  “We need to leave!” Why couldn’t he understand the severity of the situation? “Where’s Jack?”

            Tim pointed to the bottom of the stairs where Jack sat calmly, panting cheerfully.  “I think you hit your head a little hard.”

            She looked around the basement.  It seemed brighter now, less confining than a few minutes ago.  Jack’s happy face was a complete turn around from before.  She took a deep breath. “But I saw something.  There was music.”  But the edge in her voice was wavering and she wondered how hard she had hit her head.

            “It’s ok, Haley.  Jack probably bumped into you on your way down the stairs. You know what a klutz he is.”  He brushed her hair with his fingers.  He stood up holding his hand out to her, a small smile on his lips.  “Leave it to you to hurt yourself the first night here.”

            She laughed shakily, feeling relieved.  Calmness was settling over her.  She gripped his arm tightly as she got to her feet. She felt dizzy. She felt silly now, rambling about a shadow figure. It probably was Jack. She took a deep breath. Her ears were ringing and she just wanted to go snuggle on the couch with her husband. 

“You alright?”

            “Yeah, I think so.”  She put her hand to her chest, “My skin kind of burns here, I must have scraped it.”

            “Let me see.”  Tim pulled down the collar of her t-shirt to take a better look.  His eyes grew wide.

            “That bad?” She asked, patting her collar bone expecting to feel the slickness of blood.  She felt nothing but tender skin.

            His eyes were so wide she was afraid they might pop out of his head. 

“What?”

“It’s…

“Come on Tim, don’t mess with me right now.”

"Haley, it’s a handprint!”

            “A what?” She looked down. She could only see the bottom part of the print.  The round palm was bright red, almost scorched into her skin.  “Tim?”  She asked, the worry seeping back into her voice.

            “Let’s go visit your sister’s for the night.” He said quickly, his voice edged with fear.

            Haley’s eyes widened and she nodded her head.  He took her hand and went up the first step.  There was a loud pop and they were plunged into semi-darkness.  The only light came from the open basement door.

            “Let’s go!” Haley shrieked.

            Tim pulled harder on her hand as he scrambled up the stairs.  Jack let out a loud growl behind them.

            The basement door slammed, enveloping them in complete darkness.  Haley’s heart pounded so hard she feared it might explode out of her chest.  A noise pierced the quiet of the basement, so shrill and unnerving that Tim yelled, yanking his hand from hers to cover his ears.  Haley barely recognized it as the song she had first heard.  Its tune was painfully slowed and monstrously warped, each note like a knife piercing her skull.

            “Tim!” She screamed.  “Go!”

            She heard a horrifying yell then a thump come from in front of her.  Haley screamed, feeling something heavy and solid hit against her legs.  “Tim!”

            Jack yelped and howled behind her and then it was silent. She couldn't hear Jack or Tim. The music had ceased.  She couldn't move. She was frozen in terror. The darkness pressed heavily against her.  She could feel the presence of something in front of her, but was unable to see it. She felt the hand print on her chest grow white hot.  She reached up to it but found something blocked her way - a hand already placed over her chest.  A wild laughter came from the presence; evil, mocking. Pain enveloped her whole body.  She opened her mouth in a silent scream, before falling to the floor heavily.

         
     A few months later, the old house stood quiet and beautiful among the trees.

     "Oh, it's perfect!" A young woman exclaimed, as she looked up at it from the driveway. She stood with her husband, their baby cooing softly in her arms.  "It has so much space for our family! And the wood flooring is gorgeous."

     "It's quite a ways out."  Her husband said, glancing back towards the dirt driveway that snaked away into the trees.

     Their Realtor smiled her too forced smile. "But the size and the price should make up for that."

     "Yeah, about that. Why is it so cheap? I probably shouldn't say it, but it should be double this price." They young man said.

     His wife elbowed him. "Seriously? You're going to argue it's too cheap?"

     The Realtor laughed. "It is quite a steal. The old owners wanted to sell it quickly. They were moving for the husband's job and didn't have time for it to sit on the market. I would snatch it up, if I were you."

     The woman smiled at her husband. "I think it's perfect."

     He paused for a moment, before a smile spread across his face. "Ok. We'll take it."

     The couple was sharing a celebratory moment when a soft strain of music reached their ears from the distance; slow and hauntingly beautiful.

     "What's that?" The young woman asked. She furrowed her eyebrows as she glanced out towards the woods were the music emanated from.

     "Oh, it's just the neighbors." The Realtor replied, her smile faltering slightly. She cleared her throat. "Let's go sign those papers, shall we?"

Thursday, October 10, 2013

Helpful Books on Writing

After my post on Helpful Writing Websites, I actually started writing again.  So, I figured I would do a post on my favorite writing books.  I've been researching writing books from the moment I decided to go through with writing my novel.  Being a beginner, the entire process of writing a book was immensely overwhelming. Trying to sort out characters, story ideas, settings and everything else and then form it into a cohesive story arc all while making sure it stays interesting is difficult.  I've had a couple books that I've tried and they helped me very little, but I've had even more that I've read and they've helped me tremendously.


I knew that I would need to outline my novel.  I could never be someone that just started writing and hope that it ends up going well.  Many people work really well with that method, but not me.  I had no idea where to even start when outlining and that's when I found and bought K.M. Weiland's Outlining Your Novel.  It is an absolute treasure for new writers feeling lost.  It helped me flesh out my story ideas, work on my characters and put everything together into a working outline.

Find It Here
This book came out recently, right when I needed it most.  I was about to start writing the first draft and was feeling anxious about it.  I then saw that Weiland had a new book coming out and was overjoyed to have yet another writing help book from her to add to my resources. Structuring Your Novel helps you understand story structure - how to set things up to keep your book going strong.  Weiland also goes into detail on scene structure, and even briefly touches on sentence structure. Great resource!

Find It Here
The Elements of Style I saw recommended time and time again as essential to all writers.  I couldn't imagine wanting it. But, I had a Barnes and Noble Giftcard and decided I would buy it.  The cashier even sarcastically said it looked like a fun book. However, this book is a tremendous help. It's written in a way that doesn't drag and instead presents everything in a clear and informative way. Reading a little section now and then has helped me rework my sentences to read and flow better.  I now would recommend it to anyone who wants to write. It's small, and useful.  Definitely a must have.
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I just purchased this book a couple days ago.  I've seen it mentioned a few times and had some interest in it, but hadn't taken the plunge to actually buy it.  Then as I was writing, I found myself stuck on how to express someone's emotions, without constantly repeating myself.  That's when I finally bought this gem.  It's wonderful. Look up the emotion your characters feeling and find physical, mental and outward appearances that can cue a reader into how your character is feeling.  It helps you show instead of tell.

Find It Here  (There's even a a free PDF companion piece, Emotion Amplifiers, at their site.)

Personal Tip:  If you also find yourself stuck trying to figure out what your character looks like when they're happy, pissed, scared, etc., I like to try out the expression myself.  It feels a little silly to be writing then stop and pull a face, but I find it helps me better figure out what reaction I would naturally make and therefore what my character might make.  So, go ahead and make a frustrated face or your best look of shock.  But don't worry, The Emotion Thesaurus has your back if you find your acting chops aren't quite up to par.

What are your go-to writing help books?

Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Helpful Writing Websites

My intended writing blog is more of a daily life blog, nothing wrong with that.  The problem is that I've fallen off the writing wagon.  I was doing well, pumping out 1000-1500 words a night and feeling good about my rough draft - well, as good as you can feel about a rough draft.  I then went away for the weekend and haven't been able to pick it back up.  I've been staying up to date with The Ultimate Blog Challenge, but not with writing my novel.  I want to finish this rough draft.  It will hopefully be the first novel I've seen through from start to finish.  So, to help get me motivated I'm going to share a few websites that I find helpful for getting my thoughts together and finding motivation.  There's only three of them for now, but they are all excellent and have a wealth of information to keep you busy for a while.

1. /r/writing on Reddit

Usually Reddit is a fun place to stop by and look at anything and everything from around the web.  It's usually not too serious and often times a little immature, which isn't necessarily bad when you just want a fun entertaining break.  However, if you find the right subreddits they can be tremendously rewarding.  The writing subreddit is incredible for writing help.  It connects you with a vast array of other writers, from beginners, to seasoned writers and even a couple editors.  You can submit your current work for critiques, get links to advice blogs and discuss problems you are running into as you write.

2.  K.M. Weiland's Blog

I'm not sure how exactly I found this blog, but I've been following her for a long time now.  Her books Structuring Your Novel and especially Outling Your Novel have helped me tremendously as a first time writer. Her posts and books have helped me gather my thoughts and get out of the idea stage and into the writing stage.


My book is in the Young Adult genre.  Recently I found this site and it's really helpful for giving advice, giving you updates in the Young Adult writing world and also fun other tidbits to keep you entertained.  Even if you're not writing in the Young Adult genre, I feel it's a great site for beginner writers.

A quick tip. When I am going through different writing sites and finding different writing advice articles, if I find something even remotely interesting I save it as a bookmark in my 'Writing Advice' folder.  Then, when I feel like reading some articles I go through and see which ones are good and delete those that aren't quite what I was looking for.  That way I have a nice collection of writing advice to read when I need some motivation.

Do you have writing blogs or sites that you visit often to help get you motivated?  If so, please share!  I can use all the help I can get.

Sunday, September 22, 2013

On the Writing Front

At a little less than two weeks with my blog and this is only my fourth post, oy! My mom who started a blog after me has a much more interesting and updated blog.  Even if I've been unsuccessful with keeping my blog going, I have been successful with writing.  I've been writing daily, averaging a little over 1000 words a day.  It's not much, so I'm working on getting that word count up.

I've been trying to read as many blog posts, articles and other advice for writing as possible.  Trying to soak all that in while writing my first novel has been a bit of a headache at times.  I need to stop taking all the advice so seriously.  They're good ideas and jumping off points, but trying to make a huge list of do's and don'ts will only make me confused.  So, instead of pressuring myself to follow any advice I've ever seen, I'm trying to be more relaxed and go with the flow.  It's hard, but I'm trying.

I usually sit down around the same time each night to write - 10:30 PM.  That's a little late for most people, but I've always been a night owl and I seem to have the most energy at night.  I don't know why, I just do.  I try to go over what I wrote the day before just to check for mistakes, and the overall flow of everything before I settle down to write new material.

I have found that I NEED an outline to write.  My first outline was over fifteen pages in Word.  I started writing my first draft off of it, but then came up with a great deal more ideas to add in, so I went back to the drawing board, or keyboard, and redid my outline.  It's much longer, I haven't checked the exact page count.  For the second go around with my outline I used Scrivener.  I saw a lot of writers raving about Scrivener and thought I would give it a try.  It is extremely useful so far.  Especially since I need everything organized and need to be able to shift scenes and ideas around in order to have any chance at not becoming too overwhelmed and ultimately confusing myself.  I did my second outline and then started my first draft off of the outline through the program.  Seriously, check it out.

And with that, I will conclude this post.  Hoping to maybe get some writing in early tonight.  Early as in 8:30 PM, ha!


Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Writing While Sick

My first piece of wisdom, is something I can relate with right now – how to write when you’re sick.  No, not serious illness or anything, but a pestering cold with a stuffy nose, runny eyes and the feeling like your head might explode.

If you’re like me and you feel like your getting sick, your first instinct is to say well, guess I’m not writing today! then gleefully go play Facebook games with a Kleenex shoved up your nose.  Don’t do that.  Be strong.  Tell yourself you’re going to write whether you like it or not.  You will put up a fight, but eventually you will see reason.

Next grab a glass of orange juice, a water bottle, Kleenex, and make sure there’s a garbage can nearby so you’re not throwing your germs everywhere.  Pull up whatever you’re working on, whether it is a word document, notebook, or 100 year-old type writer.  Stare at it for a long time.  Wonder how it is possible for your face to feel so puffy and painful.  Write a word or two - if you’re really motivated, a whole sentence. 

Oh, hey kitty!  Nice of you to visit.  Proceed to serenade your cat with a song composed only of meows. If you don’t have a cat, just meow it to yourself. If you’re really creative come up with your own tune, otherwise, the latest chart topper works too.  After cat runs away in terror, stare off into space in a half comatose state.  Come back to consciousness, try to figure out what you’re supposed to be doing.  Remember you convinced yourself to write.  Feel cranky. Blow your nose really well.  Get your game face on. Finish a paragraph or two. Feel accomplished. Save.  The rest can wait until tomorrow.  Try not to think about what utter nonsense this will look like when you’re feeling better.  For now, it’s nap time!  Good job!

(I promise my blog posts will be more coherent once I feel better.)

Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Introduction Time

Hi, I’m Kristen.  I’m in my mid-twenties.  I have a BA in Anthropology.  I live in Washington - the state, not D.C. I'm in the process of writing my first novel. What else am I supposed to say?  I have three cats – Daisy, Monkey and Weasley.  I’m a self-proclaimed cat lady.  Well, maybe that’s too much sharing now.

This is my first adult blog.  I say 'adult blog' because I used to obsessively LiveJournal when I was younger.  I would post my teenage angst and go on about my then current obsessions ad nauseum.  I would also post my fan-fictions. I loved writing.  I’d write fan-fiction about Harry Potter, A Series of Unfortunate Events, Peter Pan, Lost, anything that I was interested in.  I rediscovered my writing LiveJournal recently and my early writing was very dark. Everyone died and the endings were always morbid.  It made me cringe seeing how original and edgy I thought it was.  Most of the stories didn't even have a proper ending because I thought it was cool to leave things extremely open-ended.  No, just no.

So, why did I start again now?  Well, I've been slogging through the process of writing my first novel.  I came up with the idea for it about three years ago, but then started a love/hate relationship with it.  During the summers I would get excited about it and develop characters or come up with ideas but when I would go back to college, I would try to avoid it at all costs.  I don’t know why, but I would put up this wall between me and writing and make lots of excuses not to write.  I used to love to write, and now I was telling myself I had other things to do instead, which wasn't completely true. 

I finally decided to just go for it. It has been a huge learning experience.  An experience that I have decided to document in this blog.  The writing process has been teaching me a lot and I hope will continue to teach me a great deal more. I am not someone to give solid advice to anyone on writing, because I’m only just figuring it out for myself.  But, by writing these lessons out, I'm hoping to document my process and if other amateur writers stumble upon my blog, feeling overwhelmed by the writing process as much as I have and still do, maybe they will learn something from my experiences too.


So, feel free to introduce yourself!  When did you first start writing?